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02/28/08
Good story, Great example of caring for a homeless man. I like how you explain the silence..Keep writing
Touching story. I'm not sure, was the MC deaf and mute? I got that impression from,"my world was silent and so were my words", but sometimes I take things too literally. :)
03/01/08
Great job staying on topic. I think, when you wrote, "But my world was silent and so were my words."
That you were saying you didn't think you had a ministry? Am I close? But you showed us that you did by taking care of this homeless man everyday and being a light in your office. Very good. You did use the wrong word once, it is spelled, dam. It always helps me to reread my entries outloud and I usually catch more mistakes that way. Thank you so much for sharing!
Laury