The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written, good descriptions really get a sense of the victims pain. Interesting take on the good samaritan story. Keep writing
Wonderful word pictures drawn through-out your entry! It's refreshing to read this familiar Bible story from the POV of the wounded man. You did a great job in describing his despair, pain, and fear as he watched people pass him by. The ultimate "actions speak louder than words" example.
Very well-written. Like the title and the flow from beginning to end. The present tense was very effective for this story in my opinion.
Perfect story for actions speak louder than words! Great writing - God bless! :)