The Official Writing Challenge
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03/02/08
Well written, good descriptions really get a sense of the victims pain. Interesting take on the good samaritan story. Keep writing
03/03/08
Wonderful word pictures drawn through-out your entry! It's refreshing to read this familiar Bible story from the POV of the wounded man. You did a great job in describing his despair, pain, and fear as he watched people pass him by. The ultimate "actions speak louder than words" example.
03/04/08
Very well-written. Like the title and the flow from beginning to end. The present tense was very effective for this story in my opinion.
03/04/08
Perfect story for actions speak louder than words! Great writing - God bless! :)