The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/08
Excellent story. Too bad life isn't a little more like that. So why can't it be - good examples - Thank you keep writing.
02/29/08
Great story. an example of actions saying it all..
03/04/08
Good story. Love the way you tied the beginning and the end together.

Don't forget to put quotation marks around dialogue.

Excellent example of the proverb. :)