The Official Writing Challenge
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02/29/08
The title caught this coffee addict. I enjoyed the story and loved the ending. I would try add some spacing though. Makes it easier to read.
Good story. SO like for real with these machines. As mentioned, white space helps. But well written.
03/04/08
What a great example of the topic!

Coffee maker wake up in a bad mood?” LOL!

A space between paragraphs and someone to give the story a look over for grammar and punctuation would shine this piece even brighter.

Good job! :)