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02/28/08
This is very well-written. We all have at least one Mrs. Rothchild in our churches! Great job in presenting the topic!
Laury
03/03/08
Boy, did you hit the nail on the head with this entry! Great characterizations and the dialogue is very natural as well. I really enjoyed reading this entry!
03/03/08
Well, you are definately on-topic with this one. Hopefully a few "Mrs.Rothschilds" will read this.
03/03/08
I absolutely love this story! Sounds like a nursery I used to help in. Thanks for sharing this.
03/03/08
So astute! What a reminder to be thankful for all out Mrs. Rothchilds. Keep up the good words.
03/03/08
What a great job with the topic! Great dialog and characterization. The prayer at the end is priceless! Wonderful. :)
03/03/08
Excellent story—believable characters.
03/03/08
Well done! This was very believable and I loved the way you nailed the topic. Oh yes, we all have a Mrs. Rothchild (or two) at church. Great job.
03/04/08
Very well-written with great descriptions and realistic thought patterns throughout.
03/04/08
Wonderful story, true to the topic. Very well written. Hopefully this will open the eyes of all the Mrs. Rothschilds out there.
03/05/08
This was good. And you know, every church has a Mrs. Rothchild in it.
03/05/08
I enjoyed your story--right on topic, and with a wonderful message. I love how you so cleverly showed Mrs. Rothchild's selfishness. The ending to your prayer was a perfect summation.
03/05/08
Excellent story with a good message!
03/06/08
Heehee, I like how your title was cute. I was waiting for the twist and props to Ashley for praying for Mrs. Rothchild. I liked the friendly setting and the characters of this piece. They were really well done, especially Ashley and her morning thoughts. Very realistic. ^_^