The Official Writing Challenge
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Gets right to the point in this poem. :) You might want to use a writing buddy to proofread for things like punctuation which is needed at the end of each line in a stanza, and the spelling of quit, rather than quite. Nice poem.
03/03/08
Oh, good! Lots of really great verses in this humorous entry! Have a buddy check for little grammar errors to polish this up, and you'll have a sparkling entry. I love the many truths you presented in this.
03/04/08
Well done in content. Right on the topic.
I found this little poem to be very funny. I enjoyed it. A few typos and grammar errors, but nothing that couldn't be easily fixed. I appreciate you sharing this.