The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/08
I love this touching story. Your ending was so tender and moving. How neat to see that Eddy's brother was about more than just words on paper with his journalism, but that he was about acting out his faith by deeds done in private. Good job.
Nice story about siblings. :)
03/02/08
Lovely - I enjoyed all the details that made this story seem so real. Wonderful message, too.
03/02/08
Good story. You may want to expland on the opening paragraph a bit to draw the readers into the story. Keep writing.
God honors good works done in secret. Phil set a good example for his family. Great story. Keep on writing.