The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/08
Wonderful testimony—and a good example of the theme.
02/28/08
What a beautiful testimony.

Better paragraph spacing would have made it easier to read, but that had no effect on the story...good job.
A true illustration of the topic. The friend was absolutely an angel of mercy. I agree that paragraph spacing would make this easier to read, but the story was wonderful, any way. God Bless
I have walked this path and relate to MC totally. With more concise writing this piece would pack a better punch.
03/02/08
Great story, agree about the paragraph spacing - seperates your ideas more and easier to read. Loved the story, great witness, title and topic fit perfect. Look forward to reading another story. Keep writing.
03/02/08
Great story. Tighten up the sentences, especially near the end and this piece will shine. Keep writing.
03/04/08
What a beautiful friend! Lovely story with a positive ending; it suits the topic well!
What a wonderful friend. Thank you for sharing this story!
What a sweet story. I teared up reading it...