The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful testimony—and a good example of the theme.
What a beautiful testimony.

Better paragraph spacing would have made it easier to read, but that had no effect on the story...good job.
A true illustration of the topic. The friend was absolutely an angel of mercy. I agree that paragraph spacing would make this easier to read, but the story was wonderful, any way. God Bless
I have walked this path and relate to MC totally. With more concise writing this piece would pack a better punch.
Great story, agree about the paragraph spacing - seperates your ideas more and easier to read. Loved the story, great witness, title and topic fit perfect. Look forward to reading another story. Keep writing.
Great story. Tighten up the sentences, especially near the end and this piece will shine. Keep writing.
What a beautiful friend! Lovely story with a positive ending; it suits the topic well!
What a wonderful friend. Thank you for sharing this story!
What a sweet story. I teared up reading it...