The Official Writing Challenge
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Ouch! It is true though. We are being watched and if they don't see anything different about our actions, then why listen to our words.
so very true, yet so few of us live the truth. great idea!
kudos. Great writing. Great topic.
02/28/08
Yes, "ouch!" is the right word. Well done.
03/02/08
A good story for teens. Keep writing.
03/04/08
Never fails-when we make an excuse and even lie, the Lord allows us to get caught! Good story and characters. Enjoyed the dialogue, too.
As Christians, we should hold ourselves to a higher standard than the rest of the world. After all, we are there to reach them and help lead them to Christ. Very good story. Thank you for sharing!