The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/08
Oh marvelous! So beautifully simple, yet the message is absolutely spot on for this topic. Love the image of the little girl with her umbrella, and yet, you didn't supply the rain-yet! What a wonderful way to keep the reading wanting to know more. I love these kinds of stories!
02/28/08
Wonderful—I love the surprise at the end, and the great example of faith in action. Good work.
02/28/08
Very cool. I saw the shriveled stalks, and the girl with the umbrella. Wonderful illustration.
Great story about a child's faith. Oh, that we were all so openly bold in our faith.
Wonderfully written. Great job!
03/02/08
Good story, like the ending. Keep writing.
03/02/08
Simple and powerful at the same time. Great story. Keep writing.
How precious. Great descriptive writing. :)
The title for this one is very appropriate. The story was short but very effective. We all need to go back to that child-like faith that doesn't question God but stands still and waits for him to move. Thank you for sharing!
This was great! You have to love the faith of little children. Great example of the topic. Well done!