The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/08
Nicely done...good cadence.
03/03/08
You've written something that many of us can relate to; the smile that's not genuine, the uncomfortable silence, the need for an action that would speak louder than the oft spoken "easy" word.
I always admire people who can write poetry, because that is one area that I have no experience in yet.

Your rhyming matched really well. You also had a great message. It's time that we all quit taking the easy route of empty words, and instead put some actions out there to show that we truly care.

Thank you for sharing.