Home Tour About What's New Help Forums Join Login My Account Shop
Save
Support
E
Book
Store
I
Need A
Savior
297
  

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge

BACK TO
CHALLENGE
MAIN

INSTRUCTIONS

how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level

ENTRIES

submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners



Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.





TRUST JESUS TODAY

TRY THE TEST



Share
how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Illustrate the meaning of "Actions Speak Louder than Words" (without using the actual phrase). (02/21/08)

TITLE: A Plain Black Book
By Patrick Whalen
02/22/08


 LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
 SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 ADD TO MY FAVORITES

The cool darkness of night that had shrouded the three quiet gates of Crossway International Airport gave way to the warmth of a new day’s sun. As the clock digits advanced on the departure screen, the gates gradually filled with passers-by waiting anxiously for their turn to board one of the metal-winged tubes whose turbines slowly spun up to speed just outside. Upon one solitary, cold leather seat among each gate laid a nondescript black book marked in simple gold print, “Holy Bible.”

Gate one was the first to fill with restless travelers, each trying diligently to find a seat of their own, separated as much as possible from the others who gathered there. The Bible remained unmoved throughout the course of the day. Several travelers glanced at it but seemed troubled at the thought of moving what might be someone else’s property in order to claim the seat. When the day of travel ended, the Bible lay there still and unopened.

The Bible in Gate two however had been picked up by one of the early morning travelers. The gate had filled to capacity with exception of the seat occupied by the plain black book. The crowd that had gathered gaped almost in awe as the late arrival dared to address them. He pointed to the book and glanced at the person sitting to the right, “Is this your Bible?” His response was a sullen shake of the head. The traveler on the left had her eyes trained studiously upon the pages of a tabloid magazine. Before a word could be uttered in question, she glanced warily upwards and explained, “That thing was here when I sat down. I don’t think it belongs to anyone here.” The traveler retrieved the book, claimed his seat and leafed through the pages. A call was made to board his flight and he placed the Bible in his pouch then disappeared down the passageway.

The third Bible was picked up immediately by the earliest traveler to Gate three. The man, dressed in freshly pressed suit and tie, hoped it was something he would consider worth reading before the long flight that lay ahead. He opened it intently to the first page but suddenly realized instead that not only was this book uninteresting to him but it actually insulted his intellect. He reached over and dumped the Bible into the trash. The warmth of daytime sun gave way once more to the cool dark of night.

The following morning, three new Bibles appeared at each gate. This time however, they sat not upon a cold and worn leather seat, but within the warm grasp of a student of the Word. As each gate filled with weary travelers, these brave souls dared to sit in the seats between the would-be passengers. Time and again an apparent unwritten code was broken as these strangers actually spoke with the travelers as they passed through the gates. “Good morning, have you heard of Jesus Christ?”

Most often those that spoke were received with cold, quiet stares and were intentionally ignored while being passed by. There were, however, occasions throughout the day when certain travelers seemed intrigued at the thought of breaking the silence for a pleasant conversation. The Bibles were opened and the words read aloud to those who would hear. By the end of the day all three Bibles had left the gates in the hands of travelers eager to learn more about the Jesus described within the black leather cover.


The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be right now. CLICK HERE

JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.


This article has been read 573 times
Member Comments
Member Date
Chely Roach02/28/08
Awesome tie-in of the topic and the Great Commission. Good job:)
Lynda Schultz 02/28/08
Fascinating story—you had me from beginning to end. Well done.
Seema Bagai 03/02/08
An interesting story. I could see this being part of a longer story where you tell more about the people who received the Bibles. Keep writing.
Yvonne Blake 03/03/08
Interesting...almost like the parable of the Sower and the Seeds. I think you could have shown a stronger contrast of the two days, somehow.
Good job, keep writing.
Joshua Janoski03/04/08
I wrote an article for my website about the "Sower and the Seeds" parable in The Bible, and I agree that this felt like a fresh take on that parable. I enjoyed it. I was interested in knowing more, so maybe you can post an expanded version later on if you feel like doing so. Thanks for sharing! :)
Lyn Churchyard03/05/08
Very good take on the topic. I had to read to the end to find out what happened. I loved your description of the airport coming to life. Isn't it wonderful that God's word never returns empty! Well done.
Julie Arduini03/05/08
What a great idea! I especially loved the descriptions in the first paragraph. My only advice and only because I'm reading this from writing how to books (not because I have it mastered!) is to watch adverb use and to keep verbs active. I saw a "had" followed by a verb and it slows the action down, and your writing is too crisp for that! I really enjoyed this, keep it up!
Holly Westefeld03/05/08
I enjoyed this unique and intriguing approach to the topic, as well as the excellent description of the setting.
Loren T. Lowery 03/05/08
Some very sound writing here and good grasp of moving a story along. This story made me think (which is a complement to the writer) why are Christians so shunned? Does our reputation precede us in that people are turned off even before the first word is heard or read? Anyway, this fine artilce had me thinking this. Hope to see more of your work in the future.
Debbie Fuhry03/06/08
I liked the story line. The writing is good overall, and interesting.

Two negatives: There might be too many adverbs and it also seemed that the story suggested an idea opposite of the challenge.
Sara Harricharan 03/06/08
I liked this. It was a different sort of 'story' and I liked the ending. It gave some hope.


   
© MeasurelessMedia. All rights reservedTerms of Service