The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/08
I like the twist at the end. Nice example of the topic, too.
Nice Job.
02/29/08
Great writing and awesome ending! God bless :)
03/03/08
This story shows the true strength and inner joy that only the Lord can give us.
I would have liked a little more description, but you may have had trouble with the word count.
Good job, keep writing.
03/04/08
very relatable article. I would try and space it a bit. Great job