The Official Writing Challenge
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Strong, relevant message. It will help the readers if you put an extra space between paragraphs. :)
02/21/08
Moving testimony--thank you so much for sharing it!

I'd suggest that you re-work the ending; you don't want to end with a cliche'. Find a strong ending in your own words that will leave your reader with something new and fresh.

With some polish, this would be wonderful for many women in the same situation to read--it's full of hope.
02/23/08
Yes, this is full of hope and should be shared. Thank you for opening up to us. Keep on writing! I like your title, by the way:)
Laury
02/24/08
Its all Three:

Wonderful message on giving it all to God and leaving it there.

Powerful prayer crying out in forgiveness to the Lord!


"The Forgiveness Factor" Good Title!


Like to read More from you. : )

I too, Learn from all your Comments. Thank you.


Enjoy and Keep in the Writing Lane.
God bless, Helen
This is a heart rendering story. I can't quite fit the topic in here, but don't give up for the topics will always change each week.
I don't see the relation to the topic, but I am still glad that the author chose to share this wonderful testimony. Many women and young girls need to hear this. I hope that it gets shared with them.
02/26/08
Moving testimony.