The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/08
I know people just like this! How sad.
02/24/08
This really touched me. I can personally relate to this story. Very realistic. Thank you.
02/24/08
I really like this story. I love how you show this old lady pushing away the only one that really loved her. Very good. Please have someone proofread your work. Keep on writing!
Laury
This reminds me of my grandmother and her relationship to my aunt and uncles. It is sad when this happens, but it is a reality for many families.

I liked the descriptions and the dialogue. Very good writing.
02/25/08
This story made the theme stand out the most for me. Great job.
02/26/08
You did a REALLY good job writing this piece. It flowed well, and you captured the emotion of the two parties perfectly. Your ending left the reader hanging, and that was very effective here.