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02/21/08
I LOVE the wordplay in the last line!
Succinct. I liked it
02/21/08
I love rose-pruning time (is that weird?), and therefore I really enjoyed this story. Your last line is great.
02/23/08
All that's missing is a verse and a prayer, and this is a perfect devotional. Love the voice and the message - very well written.
02/23/08
Great piece and a perfect last line.
Not wanting to prune is why I fail as a rose gardener. :) Loved the lesson taught so expertly in this piece.
02/24/08
Very nice piece. I love the lessons to be learned here! Thank you for sharing!
Laury
Very clever last line. Thank you for sharing!