The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 477 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
02/21/08
I think I get it...was it Ryan who "cut off his nose to spite his face"?

I think that the 2nd Coming is very difficult to write about, to imagine, to describe--your paragraphs didn't seem to me to quite capture all of its awe...the beginning, with the couple talking, and the end, when Isla is comforted by Jesus, were very strong.
02/21/08
This is every Christian mother's prayer, that her children will be with her in heaven.
Good use of dialogue.Keep writing.
Nice story, but the ending seemed a little too convenient. Unfortunately, that day will come and far too many will not have given their lives to Jesus- just the night before. Glad you were able to write that this young man had. :)
02/27/08
This brought tears to my eyes. Right when they kneeled down to pray. Thinking of that day and what it will be like...