The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/08
Thanks be to God!

This was a beautiful entry for this Easter season.

I'd love to read more of your own thoughts, though--this had several familiar Bible verses scattered throughout. And it's a good practice to eliminate most exclamation points, and to count on your own strong word choices to convey your strong ideas.

02/22/08
Beautiful! It's poetic prose.
Maybe you should try to rework it into the lyrics of a song.
Good job. Keep writing.
02/22/08
Beautiful! It's poetic prose.
Maybe you should try to rework it into the lyrics of a song.
Good job. Keep writing.
Unique style. Be sure to proof-read, there were a few small problems,like omitted words which the reader had to fill in. Nice piece. :)
02/25/08
thank you,

i appreciate your comments. anymore suggestion on where i could send my poetry after
editing it. I ll send it in again and you can tell me what you think!