The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/08
I feel the hurt in your words. Well written
An all too often story...so sad. But, the ray of hope is there in your writing. Good job!
You developed your MC well, allowing the reader to feel the pain. Nice job. :)
02/17/08
very moving story and well-written. Thanks for sharing! God bless :)
A painful story, and yet you didn't fail to include the hope and love of God in there. The story held my attention till the end. Great writing! Thank you for sharing.