The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
I love the title of your story. This is well written. Keep writing.
May God richly bless you
02/15/08
Good job with the writing. Your MC was very real, with great detailed descriptions. :)
02/16/08
The sense of hope, trouble, and despair shows so powerfully in this piece.
02/16/08
"There's no place like home."
I would have liked a little more description to help me relate to the character.
Keep writing.
02/21/08
Like the old saying goes, the grass isn't always greener on the other side. I have learned that lesson in my life, and it looks like the character in this story learned it too. Good story. Thank you for sharing!