The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
I love the title of your story. This is well written. Keep writing.
May God richly bless you
Good job with the writing. Your MC was very real, with great detailed descriptions. :)
02/16/08
The sense of hope, trouble, and despair shows so powerfully in this piece.
02/16/08
"There's no place like home."
I would have liked a little more description to help me relate to the character.
Keep writing.
Like the old saying goes, the grass isn't always greener on the other side. I have learned that lesson in my life, and it looks like the character in this story learned it too. Good story. Thank you for sharing!