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02/16/08
So sad to have unfinished business before a loved one dies.
A little more character description would have helped the reader relate to the story.
Good writing.
02/17/08
powerful story - it's hard living in a household with a family member who is not saved and challenging you at every turn. Good writing. Thanks for sharing. God bless :)
Good use of dialogue. :)
Very sad, and yet it happens so often in real life. We fail to mend things before it's too late. Thank you for sharing.