The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
So sad... This is a good example of saying "I love you" when you still can.
Each day is a new opportunity to reach out to those around us.
Touching piece. Writing expresses warmth and love. :)
02/19/08
This is a touching story. Thanks for sharing it.

Just one tiny suggestion. Avoid using the word "mantra". It's a word from Hinduism.

Keep writing. Your talent shows.
02/22/08
Congratulations, Jo, on placing 13th in your level with this piece. Great work!