The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Thank you for this! I thought I was the only one who felt that way, but apparently I am not alone. I could totally relate with her frustrations and thoughts, and with the moral of the story.
02/14/08
Wow! What a neat group of ladies to help out like that! Are they for real:) Did you have 2 titles? Just wondering.... You did a nice job. Make sure you proofread, though. Keep on writing!
Laury
02/16/08
What a wonderful, supportive church! Thanks for sharing that touching story! God bless :)
Great story and excellent writing. :)
My sister is going through a similar experience with my niece. I really liked how the ladies in this story pitched in and helped with the children.

The only thing that confused me was there being two Phillips. I think you may have forgot to put Phillip Jr. in a few spots, but I was able to figure it out as I kept reading. :)

Good job!
02/22/08
Congratulations, Cathy, on placing 14th in your level with this piece. Great work!