The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Wow! Your writing can certainly hit home for many. I myself experienced a marriage where there was a tremendous amount of pain. It ended and I was no stranger to the feelings you wrote about here.
Well written and what a great expression of feelings creatively using the Lord's Prayer as your guide.
Keep writing and many blessings to you.
02/15/08
This was very creative. I feel like you let me in to a very intimate time between you and God. Keep on writing.
Laury
02/16/08
powerful and touching. I liked the style of writing with the Lord's Prayer in between your thoughts. God bless,
02/17/08
Wonderful piece of writing. Your talent and creativity show through. Keep writing.
Wow. What a powerful piece of writing! I felt the struggle and emotions as I read it. This is one of my favorites this week.
Very real, very nice. Thanks for sharing. :)