The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very good poem, a very good example of not crying over spilt milk:) Keep up the great work!
A poem! I've learned that I DON'T like when friends say my writing is great. I want to know where I can improve.
Good writing. Keep it up
I know the struggle, and I had to go throw a phase of dying to my dreams. It's still something I've got to work on.

I'd suggest that you add some punctuation, it makes a poem easier to read. Also, you might want to rephrase some of your lines; some of them sound unnatural, such as "Poems, I do sit and write".

Keep up the good work. Please feel free to contact me if you'd like any advice or suggestions...

A very good summary of the struggle that writer's face. I like getting critiqued, because there are always so many mistakes that I overlook. You can't fix something if you don't see the problem. Keep up the great writing! :)
Very nice. Poetry isn't easy, yet yours flowed to reveal a complete story. Good job. :)