The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story - great dialogue - carries the piece along nicely and fits the topic for both father and son. Good job.
02/09/08
Well written story! I really felt for this mom and boy. You were right on topic. Keep on writing! You have talent!
Laury
02/11/08
I loved this one! My favorite part was when the boy said he was trouble and the mentor said no, you are in trouble. Quite a difference, and you showed how. Excellent job!