The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
02/09/08
Very good writing! I love the ways you wrote some phrases, especially the phone "honking." You have great descriptions. Good, good job. You stayed on topic but you did use the phrase in your entry. That will probably cause you to lose points. Keep on writing! You have talent!
Laury
Good story. Some grammar problems made parts a little difficult to read. Glad to see the happy ending. :)