The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the way you've woven a fairy tale feel into this. It relates to the topic too, but I can't help but think the prince was better off without that snooty little madam.

Make sure you edit carefully, there were a couple of spelling mistakes.

You could easily expand on this story.
02/10/08
This is a very good story. Great job staying on topic, too. Many failed in that area this week. Please get someone to proofread your work. Don't let your work be overlooked because of grammatical or spelling errors. Keep on writing!
Laury