The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/08
You wrote a good story here. You also had some funny parts, "(Typically, the last place people think to look is up….)" Although this is well written, I think it is off-topic. You do have talent, though. Keep on writing but be careful to stay on topic so you will be able to move on up.
Laury