The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/08
Oh, what a sad entry. I'm so glad you left us with a light of hope at the end. Thank you. I believe you stopped on topic. Good job! Keep on writing!
Laury
Nice job on this story line. Good details of the friends who weren't there. :)
I'm sorry that I didn't have time to read all the articles this past week, but I guess better late than never. :)

I think you touched on the problem with drug addictions very well. We have to pray for our society and those who struggle with these terrible addictions.

I also appreciate that you gave some hope at the end of the story.

Also, thank you very much for the kind comment you left me on my "Wolf in Salesman's Clothing" article. I'm glad that there were a few who saw the topic in there. :)