The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/05
There seems to be a number of different people talking here and giving their experiences. I note no Christian influences for Matt.
06/02/05
A good start, interesting dialog, but hard to discern.
06/02/05
Okay, maybe it's me but I did not get "birthday" out of any this. Very dark and negative, interesting though for a writer.
06/04/05
Great choice of scripture for "birthday." I would have liked to see expansion on that verse in your article. I seemed to be a little confused and lost as the dialog appeared to switch from person to person and the characters weren't clear. Next time, focus on only a few at most to zero in on the meaning of your story. Keep writing, though. You obviously have much going on inside your "writers" brain! Thanks for sharing. :)