The Official Writing Challenge
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I've also been learning not to worry about what others think about me... Thank you for the encouragement to keep pressing forward into that!
I would suggest that you try to add more creative imagery to this poem. You might also want to be careful to try to avoid making your rhymes too sing-songish.
Keep up the good work!
Blessings,
Ben
02/08/08
Nice to meet another Jesus freak! :) Thank you for sharing this poem. Be careful of typos. Don't want anything to distract us from your message. Good job staying on topic!
Laury