The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/08
You wrote a story that is right on topic. Good job. I have to say, though, it is not original. I'm sure you didn't do it on purpose but it is the storyline of a teen movie on Disney, I think. Mean Girls, perhaps? I think that's the one. Please, let yourself be original. Have fun.

You also need to watch for spelling mistakes. Have someone proofread for you. It's so hard to catch your own mistakes. Keep on writing. That's the way to learn!
Laury
02/09/08
Good story but there are a lot of grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors. Perhaps you could find a buddy to read your challenges before you submit them. I encourage you to keep writing!
01/11/09
Greetings, Kitt, in Jesus' Precious Name.

Thank you for your comment on "Bird Brain". I read a few of your submissions and you have some real talent and imagination that needs to be used - I noticed you haven't submitted anything lately. Keep writing and God bless.

Clyde

PS - You might enjoy "A Brief Encounter" I wrote about a year ago.