The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/08
Oh -- you ended this just the way I had hoped you would! Excellent! What a good story for teens to read. If I were you, I would write a lesson plan to go with it and give it to your minister. Maybe it could be used in their youth group. Very good writing! Keep up the great work for the Lord!
Laury
Good message to the young adults. I didn't know how you were going to end this one, but after finishing it, I had a big smile on my face. :)
02/09/08
Good job! I'm glad that at the end at least her mother noticed what she had done. The others are right - you should consider writing for teens. This was great!