The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/08
You have great thoughts in this short piece. Good job. I do think you went the anti-topic route, though. I would suggest you become part of the message board. There is a spot where you can discuss the challenge topic. You do lose points if you don't stay on topic.
Laury
02/09/08
This would be a great devotional if you deleted all first-person POV references and reworded just a few sections. This is a good piece - but you were anti-topic so you're going to lose points for that. Keep writing!
02/10/08
Good Bible study--can you give us some more examples, either from your life or from the lives of others? People relate more to stories than to hypothetical situations.

I appreciate that you pulled together several Scriptures in a tidy devotional--thanks!