The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/08
Very well-written story. It was highly engaging, too. Good job and you were right on topic!
Laury
02/09/08
Good story and dead on topic. Your dialogue is great. Keep up the good work!
02/12/08
You nailed the topic with this well crafted story. Very readable, with a likable main character. You made me empathize with him through his various emotions. It hurt that he didn't get the job - but that's the way the proverb crumbles. Keep on writing!