The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/08
Our reputations do influence how others perceive us. I would have liked this to have been expanded. You write well, but I would break up the paragraph into smaller ones. It's just much easier to read. Good job, and keep writing!
02/07/08
I like the complexity of its simplicity. You said a lot in a few words...which can be much more difficult than writing a 50 page paper. You did it very well.
02/07/08
Wow! This is very well-written. I feel that you have something really good here but you stopped yourself. Give us the rest of the story. Great writing!
Laury
02/07/08
Short and to the point. Great job.
The effectiveness of this piece was not lost due to its shortness. The author got his/her point across very well. I would have liked it to be longer simply because I was enjoying it. Good job!
02/11/08
You left me with a very memorable line "Lifelong friends on the other side of bridges never burned". I love it.
02/11/08
That is some crisp, great writing! Well done.
I Liked this very much I thought you were going somewhere else though good job!
02/12/08
You packed a lot in here with a great message. Very timely. Don't hold back. You have 750 words. Keep writing.