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01/31/08
Oh dear, how sad that Elijah had to learn that lesson at such a young age!

I wasn't clear how Elijah's mother was able to enroll him in such an expensive school.

You've created a lovable and endearing character in Elijah.
Nice comparison to "Annie". :)
02/02/08
Very good writing! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I really like little Elijah, too. Keep on writing!
Laury
02/05/08
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A very engaging and well written story!

I wish it could have ended better for little Elijah since he was already so poor, but the ending did fit the topic.