The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/05
Loved the message, "God is always listening". Sometimes his support shows up in a most unexpected way. Would have liked to hear more about that. I liked this!
Glad your depression was eased by that sign on the marquee. God works in the most unusual way.
06/04/05
Your message is an important one and this story has good bones and the ability to be much "meatier." Keep going next time so you can expand on your experiences and thoughts. Also tap a bit into your creative brain! Good job!