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05/31/05
"Give all things to God" He never forgets, always remembers and forgives all "oops'"
Nice article. I have forgotten the birthdays of people close to me and was made to feel that I had committed an unforgivable sin. I hope your guy just wanted you to see how it feels to forget someone's birthday.
06/04/05
You have a great start here. Don't stop next time and try to expand on all the points you bring forth in your article. Perhaps in this particular article you can expand more on God's love for us and how He NEVER forgets us--on our birthday or any day. There is much to say about that! You put forth good effort and with more practice writing, you will see your talent shine even more! Keep writing!