The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/08
Poor Beth!

I'd suggest a title change--this one tells your reader immediately what the story will be about.

Great job with a story that really fit this week's prompt.
02/01/08
Oops, I meant "fits."
02/02/08
Ah, how frustrating! Very good story telling. Keep on writing!
Laury
Oh, no, you can't stop there! I've got to know if Mr. Browning was one of the "good guys" or one of the "bad guys" in car sales. Way to keep this reader wanting more. :)