The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/08
This is a wonderfully written tableau--almost like a still-life with words.

I wish you had ended one sentence earlier, on that little question: will she or won't she?

This one is haunting
02/01/08
This is a wonderfully written tableau--almost like a still-life with words.

I wish you had ended one sentence earlier, on that little question: will she or won't she?

This one is haunting
02/01/08
This is most interesting but I agree with Jan, lose the last sentence. Maybe you could expand on this and go with just the one character, the woman, and write more about her. You have talent! Keep on writing!
Laury