The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/05
Excellent slant on the theme. Very creative.Try leaving a little space between paragraphs for an easier read.
06/02/05
An intriguing way of looking at the subject and very creative.
06/02/05
Creative, get rid of the 2nd. person, and add some dialog and you have a winner.