The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/08
This is very sweet. It reminds me of the widow that gave all she had as recounted in the Bible. You have an endearing character here. You could easily expand this and write more to the story. Keep up the writing!
Laury
02/02/08
A precious character study. I'd love to see it expanded; Camilia is a person well worth getting to know.

The connection to this week's topic might be a bit weak, though.

She has such a sweet attitude--nice job of writing her.
02/05/08
This is beautiful! Camilia is a lovely character that I could not help feeling connected to, I like how you showed us that in spite of everything, she still gave what she could and to her, the way she saw it was, how could she not? That was a really great attitude, excellent writing! ^_^