The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/05
I like this poem and its rhyme and its racy rhythm.
06/04/05
I like your poem! You have a flair for poetry. Good job.
06/04/05
I enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing.
06/04/05
I enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing. So true that we have nothing for eternity but God.
06/04/05
Oh, do have this poem illustrated and submit it (modified) to children's publisher.
06/10/05
what a lovely poem! it flows beautifully and has a wonderful message, too.