The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute version! You have a very creative mind.
This was creative and a delight. Enjoyed the take on "David."
(smile) Nice take on an old story! Good use of dialogue and dialect, although there are a few misspellings.
Good job...keep writing.
I like it! It was daring of you to use a backwoodsy tone--that's hard to pull of confidently but you did it with grace.
David and Goliath was my favorite Bible story as a child. I loved your Wild West take on it! This is one of my favorite entries this week! Keep up the imaginative writing.