The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/08
Great example for this topic! The conversation felt a tad stilted but you very clearly conveyed Calli's confidence and then her discouragement and feeling overwhelmed. Good job!!
01/24/08
As I looked back over this, (grin) I see that I was wrong. The conversation isn't stilted--not at all. It's just as it would be in an office setting. You did a great job demonstrating this topic! :-)
I can feel Calli's chomping on the bit to get going-been there, done that in different situations. The LORD has had to slow me down to smell the roses. Nice piece.
01/28/08
Right on topic. I've never had a consulting job, but it described so I could see it clearly.
Well done...keep writing.