The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed reading your piece. I love horses, but haven't been blessed to be able to have any, yet. Someday, soon though. I could picture the whole story. Good telling.
Great flowing story - I could picture seeing the events easily.
Excellent descriptions from someone who knows horses. I found the details very interesting. The writing is excellent.
(smile) I'm not a rider, but I easily followed every step of the story, and learned a few new words along the way.
You did very well with your descriptions and expression of thoughts.
Good job...keep writing.
The language used in this piece was excellent. I could tell that the writer knows a thing or two about horseback riding. This was a joy to read.