The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/08
I related to this story - taking many years of piano lessons myself and knowing how scary it is to be in front of people. Great flow to the story - keep up the terrific writing!
My son and daughter both play the piano and I can relate to the little girl in this story. I was happy to see the adults were understanding. Great job on topic.
01/28/08
Right on topic! I remember when I first played the piano for church. It was scary!
I might have made this more realistic if you added some dialogue.
Good job...keep writing.