The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, we really need to get our heads out of the sand! Not every young person has that kind of cathartic experience. How many are out there dying while we play church and entertain ourselves with blinders on to the hurting world around us!
01/25/08
So sad...
I had a little trouble switching my point of view. I like how she found the answer to her problems.
good job...keep writing.
01/28/08
Good job - I could feel your MC's despondency, and I liked the conclusion. Keep writing!!